Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Edit the Inquirer

First time when I wrote the paragraph of "How can the animal can see the ghosts?", That time, I think I don' have any error in there but now, I can see what sentence has wrong vocabulary and grammar. Now I will show my video, what I edited the parts of inquirer paragraphs. I hope you guys enjoy this movie.


1 comment:

  1. Great Job Soo Min. This is a fantastic video. Very simple. clear and easy to understand. It is clear you really understood singular and plural nouns. Could you please add your 1st and 2nd drafts of writing to this post. So we can see the difference.

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